She took out the finest and most elegant one of her
wardrobe. It was a tailored black dress with fine lines of black sequins on the
front that would have fell till her knee only if she could fit in there. Age
has plumped her out. With Adele singing Someone Like You in the
background, she sat together with the dress and sewing box and yanked out the
stitches, careful enough not to ruin the material. It took her whole night to
get the dress fit on her. She stared at her reflection on mirror, too long,
watching the dress slowly settling along her skin.
At the break of dawn she started preparation. It was
four hours of drive to the place and she didn’t want to be late. She had waited
too long to forget what was that she was waiting for. No more wait. She was
finally going to meet him.
The more time passed, the more distance she covered,
the more anxiety and nervousness crept in her. How would it feel to wake up
every morning with no more anticipation? For whose arrival would she be waiting
upon every night, staring out of the window from an empty house? She clenched
the steering wheel harder, trying to push these weird thoughts out of window
and focus on the road. Did the trick work? It would have only if her lame mind
was under her restraint.
Finally she reached there in time. The sun was still
young in sky. Bird chirruped in unison. She parked her car in the lot. He palms
were sweating. She took out the flowers form backseat, smoothed her dress,
tucked the strand that had fallen from her tight bun, straightened her shoulder
and silently marched towards the small gathering. The crowd tore apart upon her
welcome, allowing her to grace the way. She put on a faint smile and walked
towards him.
He was lying there, with a like always. She rested
the flowers on him and sat next to him. It seemed age had reverse affect on
him. He looked more calm and radiant.
She wished he would open his eyes and tell her how she looked in the
dress. Fifteen years. For fifteen years she waited for him to come and talk to
her. Every night of fifteen years, she wished that, it would be the last
haunted night in her life, until two days back when she got this phone call. Finally
a tear finally rolled down her cheek.
Everyone stood up in attention as the priest came
upon. “It’s time my child,” The priest spoke politely to her. She just nodded,
wiping the wet trail on her face.
that was very touching...a long wait and a love that never fades..stirrring
ReplyDeleteYou surprised me with this! I wasn't expecting that turn, N! Very good storytelling.
ReplyDeleteA very good and touching story. You write so well!
ReplyDeleteI couldn't imagine waiting for so long and then to lose him... but she is right, they will see each other again... xox
ReplyDeleteGreat encounter in the story! Gracefully written even it ends at grave :)
ReplyDeleteYou know how beautiful this was. The narration..I could feel the pain, the love, the connection ...
ReplyDeleteLoved it.
Beautifully written! I really loved the narration. Keep posting!
ReplyDeleteI love the imagery here. Painful, yet beautiful. Narration is your strongest point. I love how you describe characters and scenes.
ReplyDeleteThis is a truly incredible piece of writing. Very impressive!
ReplyDeleteOmg...this was really so touching..
ReplyDeleteI expected dat it would end on a happy note....
Ps..: loved your blog title...!!