Tuesday, May 13, 2014

The FaLL






The unexpected fall,
That is tangent and pungent,
Through the sharp shrill of air,
On her bare neck,
And the dream cracking cries.

Among the chaos,
She searches for one voice,
The particular one hushed,
Hot whispers in her ear,
Every morning before sunrise.

Alas! She finds none,
As the proximity is long gone,
Grasping the distance,
Transcending the space.

The sharpness of air,
Eases over her skin,
Into downy petal swirl,
Waits down there,
Heavensome bellows of water,
To invite the angel.

18 comments:

  1. I look for that one voice... I never hear it anymore... that is sad... very sad

    Very moving ...

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    1. Before you close your eyes and turn away just think, once, what if the person is just there in crowd and trying to reach to you.
      Don't lose hope dear.

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  2. Ouch! The complete opposite take of mine. Somehow, I liked this one better :)

    Lovely!

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    1. Same here Soumya...I think your one is more diligent. :)

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  3. oops what have i done.. my internet did a FALL here , i pushed publish and nothing happened so dontknow if the precious one went or not ..

    I was saying that sometimes Fall is good , as there is no-where DOWN to go , the only is UP..

    sorry to go on a tangent , I know this is not what the poem is about ..

    Bikram

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  4. Painful when dreams crack..but, continue the search..

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    1. Thank you Truedessa. Yeah! We should never stop for a past lagging.

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  5. That was intense, did you write it yourself?

    ashley-ashstash.blogspot.com

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  6. You captured the image beautifully...

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    1. The credit goes to the image..it was intense that word poured out themselves. :)

      Thank you for peeking over here. :)

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  7. Whoa so strongly put, awesome poetry!

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  8. Poignant. You beautiful writer.

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  9. Really nice Namrata...I like where you took this image with your words!

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  10. This is too deep ... loved the words :-)

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  11. Looking forward to another poem from you Namrata! :-)

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