This is that
mirror,
To all vividly
reflecting,
After leaving
this body,
You have caught
me in.
Tears in your
eyes,
Streaming down
my cheeks,
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Wry smiles on your
face,
Touching to my
lips.
You put a hand
forth,
I mirror the
same,
Touching you at
the tips,
Myriads of
pleasure I get.
It’s hurting to
see,
You breaking
like coal,
I crave to step
out,
Wing you in my
soul.
Like ages will
pass,
I’ll stay
inside,
Till you speak
that,
Loving final
goodbye.
Poignant and very profound! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Rachit! I am glad you found your way back to here..seriously it's really nice to see your comment after a very long time.:)
DeleteBeautiful lines pulling the strings of the heart and making it ache.
ReplyDeleteThanks for being such a loving reader..:)
DeleteBeautiful, poignant and touching!
ReplyDeleteThank you Me...for finding the beauty in these mourning words..only I know how I wrote this...such worst phase of life!
DeleteCongratulations, budding poet. The poems touches the heart and stirs the soul!
ReplyDeleteThanks The Gardener...:)
Deletelovely words...nicely crafted lines!
ReplyDeleteFirst of all I am sorry to be posting what may be a random garbage to you like an intruder. But please go through this and help us.
ReplyDeletehttp://despoticorg.blogspot.in/2013/06/trivandrum-victim.html
This is a rather tragic story of some helpless employees working in C-DAC, Trivandrum a government of India organisation under DeiTY. Please help us by spreading or posting some advice. Please do not see this as abogus post or the one intended for 'hits'. Please spread.
As we have said in the post, its impossible for us to go against the management openly as it will cost our jobs. We are not permanent employees. We are just on contract. They can just let us go today if they want. And most of us being only 'employed ones' from our family, we cannot afford to lose our jobs. So as we said an open protest is difficult even if legally. But as you said its ridiculous that a central govt org is doing this. Yes, they are and have been doing this sort of things as ths org is not that much in public domain. Most of the public dont even know such an org exists. So thats why we are seeking public help to spread awareness of things happening. Once its in the public they will feel threatened. And as we cannot possibly bring this out in the public [as it will cost our jobs] we ask for social media help. Thanks again.