Sunday, June 2, 2013

The Mirror

This is that mirror,
To all vividly reflecting,
After leaving this body,
You have caught me in.

Tears in your eyes,
Streaming down my cheeks,
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Wry smiles on your face,
Touching to my lips.

You put a hand forth,
I mirror the same,
Touching you at the tips,
Myriads of pleasure I get.

It’s hurting to see,
You breaking like coal,
I crave to step out,
Wing you in my soul.

Like ages will pass,
I’ll stay inside,
Till you speak that,

Loving final goodbye.


  1. Poignant and very profound! :)

    1. Thank you Rachit! I am glad you found your way back to here..seriously it's really nice to see your comment after a very long time.:)

  2. Beautiful lines pulling the strings of the heart and making it ache.

    1. Thanks for being such a loving reader..:)

  3. Beautiful, poignant and touching!

    1. Thank you Me...for finding the beauty in these mourning words..only I know how I wrote this...such worst phase of life!

  4. Congratulations, budding poet. The poems touches the heart and stirs the soul!

  5. lovely words...nicely crafted lines!

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