Saturday, May 11, 2013

The Truth


The truth
That you flanked and I denied,
That you plunged and I survived.


The truth
That throve on your hunger and disguised my love,
That was your amuse but my only job.

The truth
That you ditched and I caved,
That you flinched and I saved.

The truth
That smelled of your alcohol and my blood,
That craved for your mercy and my nerve.

The truth
That was intense than death and colder than ice,
That was cruel than rapist and played on dice.

The truth
That there was only you and I was a lie,
As the truth is free, I can happily die.

12 comments:

  1. The truth
    That the poem was splendid and I could only admire.

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    1. Thank you Hat-boy...your admiration, my credit..:)

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  2. Intense and beautifully written.
    I liked it!



    Is there any way we can get in contact? To know more of each other :)

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    1. Thank you Srishti..yeah..of course..I wud luv to..here is my fb id.
      http://www.facebook.com/namratapatro

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  3. Such a nice poem!

    And the accompanying picture is really great!

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  4. I am proud that an Odia girl is writing such intense poems

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    1. Thank you The Gardener...I'm also proud of my identity...:)
      And happy that you liked it. :)

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  5. realy its splendid,amazn

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  6. Hey,
    You have been awarded a Versatile Blogger Award .
    Please visit the link for details.
    The Shaded Shadows

    Take Care. :)
    Ajay Kontham

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    1. Thank you Preethi..for visiting and leaving such a nice comment..:)

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